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very nice image, some things to improve: the focus is great on the screw, but i would love to see more focus on the torn paper in the foreground. while this camera model does not allow dual focus, you can take a seperate photo and photoshop them so the tear is in focus, it would look much better (or focus out more then zoom in, only needing one photograph). the shadow of the screw on the left would have been better completely seen, instead of cropped off about a millimeter premature. also, download a program called 'neat image' from download.com, it will clean up some of the grain in this photo, probably caused by high ISO or low image quality.

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